My best scene would have to be my second scene because it was action packed. The second scene is also where most of the story unfolded and it was much more detailed than the other scenes. My worst scene would have to be my third scene because it was too short. In that third scene is when the hero finally resolves his conflict and for that scene I only used about half of a page. There is a character that is both introduced in that scene and then they vanish. I think that I could improve my script by adding more detail to it. Even the protagonist is somewhat mysterious because I didn't really describe whether or not he had malicious intentions. I would improve my script by adding more complex dialogue so that the reader will be able to grasp what is happening throughout the script.
Concept # 7
1) A single day- Drake and Josh
2) A week- Pan's Labyrinth
3) Several Months- Cast Away
4) Ten or more years- Forest Gump
In Cast Away aging is shown through the man. In the movie he starts off with little facial hair and in later scenes he is shown with a big beard to show long periods of time have passed.
Forest Gump shows the passing of time by having the protagonist start off as a little boy and then later in the scenes show an adult character playing his role to show aging.
Question # 2
If my movie is only 5 minutes long in "Reel" time the percentage of real time that will be depicted will be 0.35%.
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