Blog # 5 Script revision

In my script the Protagonist buddy says a lot of things that he doesn't have to say and just makes the script longer and it is unnecessary. He talks about the chocolate too often and about what e is going to do to get it and what to do after he gets it. I think that I can cut some stuff out of his dialogue and replace the space in another scene where I  have a person that only has 3 lines. I also have the part where the king tells buddy that there is a "Magical" chocolate arriving and that it could help him out because buddy could find that out on his own. This will keep the readers thinking of what buddy could do for his revenge instead of knowing everything from the beginning.